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Monday, February 24, 2014
Topic 5: Physical Appearance
If you could change one physical part of your body, what would you change and why?
If I want to change physical part of my body i'll change my whole body , and replace it with a fitness body XD ,but this things would never get because i can not abandon eating .
If I could chang one physical part of my body, I would like change my stomach to beatiful sixpack. In fact I try for that I go to the gym every day and I also get diet but it is very dificult. When I was younger mean I was in high school I had flat stomach because I tried kick boxing and I also had sixpack but I got very bad damage ein fight competition so afer that I could not do any sport very well and I got alot of fat. In short, i would like change my stomach to sixpack.
omg, did you feel some pain when he kick . why you stop why ! sport is very good things how do you get sixback . but don't wory you'll back you'r sixback and i hpe for you to be like Ehab Darwish .
In my religion it can be under conditions . First of all , if something in the body looks like ugly it can change to be beautiful . For example my cousin when he was young, he always like to play soccer, in one day there was a guy who throw the ball into his nose and then it veered to right . he went to the hospital, and they said when you become 20 years old we will fix your nose . Secondly , another thing to change something in the body if it has burns, it could change to be beautiful, for instance, I have friend who had burns in his hand and he wanted to change, but the process was very expensive. in short , I hope my body to be fine because i want to follow my religion .
I think I not really want change any part of my body, if my body have any problem I hope I can treat them, not just change them. If anybody change their body just them want, I think the world will become very strange,and possibility I can't identify who I know.
I think i don't want change physical part of my body. Because this is from my god . Some people don't have what i have . i'm lucky because i have two hand and two feet and i can walk and playing foot ball and can see that is big grace if you can't see that is big problem and can hear . Some people travel to another countre for get cure to thwm eyes and them ears . And some people don't have hands and feet thay can't walking and play foot ball and go to him school and thay can't do home wark some time is good HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH. If you don't have hands or feet or ears or eyes what do you do ...?
Nothing cause im a convinced of god is creation and my professional appearance
ReplyDeleteYes , i agree with you , i'm convinced of god is creation
Deletealso, I am agree with you hala
DeleteAll right Hala .
Deleteall right i agree with you ...
DeleteI am glad that you say that you would not change anything about your appearance. You are beautiful as you are!
DeleteYes, I agree with Professor May. You are beautiful!
DeleteIf I want to change physical part of my body i'll change my whole body , and replace it with a fitness body XD ,but this things would never get because i can not abandon eating .
ReplyDeletehhhhhhhhh i like it
Deletehhhhh ok you want body XD but you can not do diet , sleep early and happy dream with your body .
DeleteHahaha! You look fine as you are. To forfeit food is too much!
DeleteYes. You look fit!
DeleteIf I could chang one physical part of my body, I would like change my stomach to beatiful sixpack. In fact I try for that I go to the gym every day and I also get diet but it is very dificult. When I was younger mean I was in high school I had flat stomach because I tried kick boxing and I also had sixpack but I got very bad damage ein fight competition so afer that I could not do any sport very well and I got alot of fat. In short, i would like change my stomach to sixpack.
ReplyDeleteLast reply for me it's mistake and you want beautiful body you can do it this but train well and good luck .
DeleteHaha, really? Oh no, I am sorry to read that you had an injury in high school. What happened?
DeleteAre you okay now? I'm sorry to hear about the injury.
DeleteI agree with you and I don't think that there is anything in my body should be changed because God made us in a perfect shape.
ReplyDeleteomg, did you feel some pain when he kick . why you stop why ! sport is very good things how do you get sixback . but don't wory you'll back you'r sixback and i hpe for you to be like Ehab Darwish .
DeleteYou look great, so yes, there is nothing that needs to be changed. :)
DeleteYes. Everyone is unique and beautiful.
DeleteIn my religion it can be under conditions . First of all , if something in the body looks like ugly it can change to be beautiful . For example my cousin when he was young, he always like to play soccer, in one day there was a guy who throw the ball into his nose and then it veered to right . he went to the hospital, and they said when you become 20 years old we will fix your nose . Secondly , another thing to change something in the body if it has burns, it could change to be beautiful, for instance, I have friend who had burns in his hand and he wanted to change, but the process was very expensive. in short , I hope my body to be fine because i want to follow my religion .
ReplyDeleteThank God for everything .
DeleteThat's great! You look fine!
DeleteThat's difficult when accidents happen.
DeleteI do not want change anything because God gave me all things and I liked everythings.
ReplyDeletethank you God.
all right
DeleteThank you Basmah you're right .
DeleteYes, you look beautiful!
DeleteYes. We need to remember to be thankful for what we have.
DeleteI agree with you and I don't think that there is anything in my body should be changed because God made us in a perfect shape.
ReplyDeleteI think I not really want change any part of my body, if my body have any problem I hope I can treat them, not just change them.
ReplyDeleteIf anybody change their body just them want, I think the world will become very strange,and possibility I can't identify who I know.
Haha, you have made a very good point. Are there some people you cannot identify now due to changes that they have made?
DeleteI agree. It would be scary if everyone looked exactly the same.
DeleteI think i don't want change physical part of my body. Because this is from my god . Some people don't have what i have . i'm lucky because i have two hand and two feet and i can walk and playing foot ball and can see that is big grace if you can't see that is big problem and can hear . Some people travel to another countre for get cure to thwm eyes and them ears . And some people don't have hands and feet thay can't walking and play foot ball and go to him school and thay can't do home wark some time is good HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH.
ReplyDeleteIf you don't have hands or feet or ears or eyes what do you do ...?
If someone don't have those maybe he or she will ask you if you can help him .
DeleteYes, we need to be thankful for all that we have. Good point!
DeleteYes, I agree. We need to be thankful for things we often take for granted!
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